Thursday, April 9, 2009
Embryonic Stem Cell Motivator
Anyone have ever imagined that organ transplant law can be removed once and for all? Anyone wondered that the queue for new organs for transplant can be removed? Many have wanted them to happen and found many ways to go about trying to solve it. Embryonic Stem Cell is one of the most prominent way to solve this problem as it is feasible to many and it could be done in the near future with the speed of today's technology advancement. It could help many, as scientists say. It will create many people with organs produced by animals in their body walking around, living like normal. People that are close to you might have cloned organs from animals or a living embryo. However, I disagree that it should be continued as it will create problems in moral ethics and many problems will soon arise, like people abusing the organs created out of animals.
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4 comments:
quite nice
maybe try not to explain too much abt gd points, since u against it
"Anyone have ever imagined that organ transplant law can be removed once and for all? "
Should be "Has anyone ever imagined..."
Still. I think your commentary is not fulfilling teacher's request, i.e. it's not even attracting enough attention. it's, boring, and too factual, like a history essay opening. Start with a interesting statement or something.
And you said mine wasn't a commentary. Your introduction and your main body text contains facts, facts and more facts, except for your stand. Like, hello?
Quite a nice intoduction but try to clarify your thesis statement.
*Btw is Dawnbreak Renegade and Scorpian Rlder the same person which is Simon Poh? If he is then he is really bo liao....
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